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Abhivyakti Me Aapki Pratikriya 1785 30.10.2011, at 21:43:33 Aapka Naam: MOHAN LAL Email: sodhamohan@gmail.com Where are you from?: SURATGARH Rachana Ka Shirshak: नन्दराम आळी ढाणी Lekhak Ka Naam: MOHAN LAL SODHA Comments: THIS IS A RAJASTHANI POEM , ABOUT A MARRIGE. 1784 27.10.2011, at 16:32:25 Aapka Naam: राजरानी शर्मा Email: rajranis@gmail.com Where are you from?: ग्वालियर Rachana Ka Shirshak: करवाचौथ Lekhak Ka Naam: Comments: क्यों भारतीयता की हर मर्यादा को धो धो कर मिटने मैं लगे हो भाई ----कहानी कुछ ज्यादा ही बनावटी हो गयी 1783 26.10.2011, at 00:24:26 Aapka Naam: Prem Prakash Goswami Email: goswami.premprakash@gmail.com Where are you from?: Nashik Rachana Ka Shirshak: Dansh/Papa aap kahan gaye/Badal chhant gaye Lekhak Ka Naam: Alka Pramod Comments: Dear Alkaji, Aamtaur par main pratikriyaen dene mein aalsi hoon, lekin aapki in teenon rachnaon ne mujhe aisa karne par majboor kar diya. Aapki rachanaien aisee khasiyat rakhtee hein ki har ek vyakti use khud se jodne ki koshish karta hai. Please tell me, where I can get read your other fentastic stories/novel etc. Besically I am very font of stories,but I also like novels. Congratulations once again for fentastic writing. All the best for ever. 1782 25.10.2011, at 20:50:05 Aapka Naam: pawanpandey Email: pawanpandey56@gmail.com Where are you from?: chhattisgarh Rachana Ka Shirshak: thunth Lekhak Ka Naam: rishivarma Comments: pend poudhe hamare kitane kam aate hai. jab tak hare bhare the ful,fal,hawa dekar paryawaran banate hai our thunth bankar bhi antim yatra me sath nibhate hai. ye hamare sachhe mitra hai. prerana dene wali is kahani ko pad kar laga jaise ye hamare aas pass ki kahani hai. bahut shubhkamna. 1781 24.10.2011, at 08:59:33 Aapka Naam: kamal Email: krkumar1949@gmail.com Where are you from?: bhilai india Rachana Ka Shirshak: internet dating Lekhak Ka Naam: usha raje suxana Comments: kisi par wiwas karne se pahle use acchi tarh parkhen jaldbaji na karen wah bhi jab sawal jeewan bhar ka ho.sada yad rakhen har chamkane wali chees sona nahi hoti. 1780 19.10.2011, at 15:59:26 Aapka Naam: rajinder Email: rajinderc@gmail.com Where are you from?: haryana Rachana Ka Shirshak: naukari ki awashyakta Lekhak Ka Naam: lakshminandan vora Comments: pahali bar abhivyakti ko dekha. bahut achchha laga.naukari ki awashyakta kahani bhee padhi achchhi lagi. aasha hai aapka niymit pathak banuga. shubhkamnon sahit 1779 18.10.2011, at 17:47:06 Aapka Naam: shivani Email: shivani_abhiraj@yahoo.com Where are you from?: kuwait Rachana Ka Shirshak: badri maiya.. Lekhak Ka Naam: jaynandan Comments: ye kahani bilkul pasand nahi aaye...........agar badri maiya itna kast na jheltey aur sab kuch beto ko na deker..apne beti ko de detei.....to shayad aur logo ke liye prerna bantey.....aise ro roker kiya faida hua.... jin beto bahu ne unke sath itna bura kiya..unhey he apna sab kuch deker chali gaye..... 1778 18.10.2011, at 10:57:05 Aapka Naam: श्रीकान्त मिश्र ’कान्त’ Email: skant124@gmail.com Where are you from?: चन्डीगढ़ - कोलकाता Rachana Ka Shirshak: बदरी मैया Lekhak Ka Naam: जयनंदन Comments: कहानी बदरी मैया ग्रामीण परिवेश में प्रमुख चरित्र बदरी मैया के चारो ओर घूमती यह एक मर्म स्पर्शी कथा है। कहानी के रूप में बहुत ही सुंदर प्रकार सेवर्तमान परिवेश के कई जवलंत पृश्नचिन्हों के रेखांकित करते हुये ढाला गया है। बदरी मैया कोई कालपनिक पात्र नहें है अपितु वह है हमारे समाज में विद्यमान आज का कटु यथार्थ है। इसका दु:खद पक्ष यह है कि जिन जड़ों से पुष्पित और पल्लवित होकर नयी पीढ़ी सर्व रसित जीवन व्यतीत कर रही है उसके प्रति कृतज्ञता भाव तक नहीं .. हा रे ! समाज और बदलती सामाजिकता। बदरी मैया को ले जाने वाले मामा भी तो पुरानी पीढ़ी से ही हैं । गांव का कोई व्यक्ति और नवयुवक आगे नहीं आता ..? इस कथानक के माध्यम से यह एक अबूझ पृश्न भी प्रस्तुत है । टीसते हुये इस प्रश्न के साथ छोड़ती है - आभार 1777 17.10.2011, at 13:10:59 Aapka Naam: कृष्ण कुमार अग्रवाल Email: aggarwalkk83@gmail.com Where are you from?: कुरुक्षेत्र भारत Rachana Ka Shirshak: डाकटिकट और पंचतंत्र की कहानियां Lekhak Ka Naam: पूर्णिमा वर्मन Comments: बहुत अच्छा लेख.जानकारी के साथ मनोरंजन भी.बहुत बहुत बधाई. 1776 17.10.2011, at 13:02:24 Aapka Naam: श्रीकान्त मिश्र ’कान्त’ Email: skant124@gmail.com Where are you from?: चन्डीगढ़ - कोलकाता Rachana Ka Shirshak: डाक टिकट और पंचतंत्र की कहानियाँ Lekhak Ka Naam: — पूर्णिमा वर्मन Comments: अमूल्य डाकटिकटों के पुनरावलोकन और पंचतंत्र की सर्वदा संदेशपरक कहानियों पर आपके आलेख ने फिर से तरुणावस्थातीत कर दिया। - आभार 1775 17.10.2011, at 08:07:29 Aapka Naam: ashwini tyagi Email: tyagiashwini50@gmail.com Where are you from?: gurgaon Rachana Ka Shirshak: Badrimayya Lekhak Ka Naam: Jainandan Comments: ...Abhivyakti dekhi..padhi....hriday se badhai is suruchipurn prastuti ke liye ! 1774 13.10.2011, at 02:59:46 Aapka Naam: praveen Email: parveensiriyasar@gmail.com Where are you from?: jhunjhunu Rachana Ka Shirshak: itam nambar das Lekhak Ka Naam: durgesh guphte raj Comments: sarcus ki jindagi ji rahe insan ki bhawana ko aapne jiwant kar diya hai. bahut shubhkamna,my no.8107060028 1773 12.10.2011, at 21:21:04 Aapka Naam: pawanpandey Email: pawanpandey56@gmail.com Where are you from?: chhattisgarh Rachana Ka Shirshak: itam nambar das Lekhak Ka Naam: durgesh guphte raj Comments: sarcus ki jindagi ji rahe insan ki bhawana ko aapne jiwant kar diya hai. bahut shubhkamna. 1772 12.10.2011, at 16:05:08 Aapka Naam: ankit vyas Email: ankitvyas@ymail.com Where are you from?: rajnandgoan Rachana Ka Shirshak: pagdandi Lekhak Ka Naam: Comments: bahut hi accha laga padkar aise hi lekhte rahe shubhkamnayein. 1771 12.10.2011, at 15:10:59 Aapka Naam: Dr. R.P.Sharma Email: drps1950@gmail.com Where are you from?: Aligarh, But now at Delhi Rachana Ka Shirshak: baisakhi, yamuna aur bachhe Lekhak Ka Naam: Kavita Vachnavali Comments: Sansmaran aur nibandh mai agar koi vishesh antar hai to sirf yahi ki sansmaran us khas ghatna/vyakti ke tane-bane se judta rahata hai, jabaki lalit nibandh us ghatna/vyakti ko arambh karne ka ath lalit nibandhkar idhar udhar ke muttar gasti karate karate jub doosri baat kahane ko hota hai to usper aatahai. Prastut rachna mai is tarah ki bhatkan nahi hai par sansmaran jaisi bunavat bhi nahi hai. to, to kuchh nahi, yah koi jaroori thode hi hai ki hum bane-banaye chokhte ma fit hon hi. Agyeya ke sari lalit rachnayan aisi he hai, aur Smratichhanda ke unke sansmaran kya hai sahi yah to Pdt. Vidyanivas Mishra tak ne mana ki kahana kathin hai. Rachna ki bunavat, sutro ka uthana, unka pallavan, aur lilityakari prasungo ka smavesh sabhi prasansniya. Sabash. 1770 12.10.2011, at 13:31:41 Aapka Naam: Santosh Luthra Email: santoshluthra@gmail.com Where are you from?: Riyadh, Saudi Arabia Rachana Ka Shirshak: Bonsai Lekhak Ka Naam: Amita Neerav Comments: pratham pritikriya ----kahaani ke ant mein bonsai ke gamle ko fenk kar torhne mein jo vyatha vyakt hui hai wah anaayaas Agyeya kee kahaani 'Heeli bone kee batkhen'kee yaad dilaa jaati hai .man ko chhoo jaane waali rachna . 1769 11.10.2011, at 12:31:42 Aapka Naam: dr.rajesh neerav Email: neeravrajesh@gmail.com Where are you from?: indore Rachana Ka Shirshak: bonzai Lekhak Ka Naam: amita neerav Comments: क्या बोनजाई को रोप कर फ़िर से पेड़ नहीं बनाया जा सकता ? 1768 10.10.2011, at 19:19:06 Aapka Naam: devendra Email: devendra.bharadwaj@in.com Where are you from?: jhansi Rachana Ka Shirshak: chandan nagar ki jagadradik pooja Lekhak Ka Naam: manousi chatterji Comments: Mujhe is utsav ka vivran padhkar wakai chandan nagar ki is pooja ko dekhna ka man kar raha hai.. well written description... aisa laga sab kuch saamne hi ho raha hai.. 1767 09.10.2011, at 13:40:11 Aapka Naam: Santosh Luthra Email: santoshluthra@gmail.com Where are you from?: Riyadh, Saudi Arabia Rachana Ka Shirshak: Waapasee Lekhak Ka Naam: Shail Agrawaal Comments: barha bhag hai mera ,jo 2002 ke 15 agusta kee yah kahaani parhne ko mili .yah kahaani aazadi ke din hee prasaarit(?) honee chaahiye thee man-chaahaa hone kee kaisi sahaj-sundar abhivyakti man anaayaas bheeg uthataa hai aankhe bhee . 1766 08.10.2011, at 13:14:13 Aapka Naam: monika Email: praveensmonika@gmail.com Where are you from?: bihar Rachana Ka Shirshak: sayani bua Lekhak Ka Naam: mannu bhandari Comments: bahut hi sahaj rachna aur khoobsurat si abhivyakti mera bhi saabka aise logo se pada hai mt poochiye kya haal hota hai mera main badi avyavasthit hn kisi cheez ko kahi bhi rkhne wali sochiye mera kya haal hota hoga aaj is kahani ko padh k lg rha hai un logo ko bhi padha dun:) 1765 07.10.2011, at 16:17:24 Aapka Naam: ashrlesha Email: ashrlesha@yahoo.com Where are you from?: Rachana Ka Shirshak: aate samay Lekhak Ka Naam: dr.kusum ansal Comments: kusum ji 'aate samay'kahani padi .ek nari ka man isi tarah akelepan se bhara rahata h shyad sari umar. jine ki ichhayen marti rahati h.achhi lagi .thanxs. 1764 04.10.2011, at 10:01:17 Aapka Naam: pawan pandey Email: pawanpandey56@gmail.com Where are you from?: chhattisgarh Rachana Ka Shirshak: yah to koi khel na hua Lekhak Ka Naam: navneet mishra Comments: muk bejuban pashu ke mukh se kahi gai yah kahani dil ko bhaw bibhor kar gai.bahut shubhkamna. 1763 03.10.2011, at 22:36:08 Aapka Naam: kislay Email: vijaytiwari5 Where are you from?: jabalpur, india Rachana Ka Shirshak: हिन्दी रूपांतर- विद्रोही Lekhak Ka Naam: रवीन्द्रनाथ ठाकुर Comments: दीदी, नमस्कार. अच्छा लगा. आपके प्रयास तो होते ही हैं काबिले तारीफ़. - विजय. 1762 03.10.2011, at 10:14:41 Aapka Naam: aruna gupta Email: profagupta99@gmail.com Where are you from?: i p college d u india Rachana Ka Shirshak: internet dating Lekhak Ka Naam: usha raje saxena Comments: beautiful khani ka ant soch me dalta hai usha ji may be this is how life goes 1761 01.10.2011, at 12:35:51 Aapka Naam: Santosh Luthra Email: santoshluthra@gmail.com Where are you from?: Riyadh Rachana Ka Shirshak: Lautate hue Lekhak Ka Naam: C P ShriRaman Comments: Malyalam kahaani 'Ndakk Yaatra' ka Hindi roopantar parhne men aanand aaya.Yadi roopaantarkaar kaa naam bhi den to achha hoga.sochti rahi,' LAUTATE HUE'KAA PRAYOG KIS SANDARBH MEIN ? 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